A haiku challenge
5 7 5 syllables!
Include the weather
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A haiku challenge
5 7 5 syllables!
Include the weather
The rain has moved on
It was windy and heavy
My car is now clean
it's nearly winter
i have to buy some new shoes
before my feet freeze
children running in
bring in the chill autumn air
time to shut the door.
Clothes soaked through with rain
Quickly jump in a warm bath
Hot milk brings a smile
As heedless rain pounds,
the furtive wind heaves branches.
Stay close, my child. Warm.
Haikus don't make sense.
Breathe winter, breathe rain, breathe in.
Haiku. Haiku. Breathe.
Nelle, gah, you pillock!
Haikus are beautiful things.
The rain is nice too.
Creativity
Blossoms in your Haiku lines
Warm like the sunshine
A red leaf trembles
Fragile in the autumn wind.
Don't let this thread die!
This thread is undead
No vegetarians here
Snake tastes like chicken
Lu your lines are true
Snake loves a rock warmed by sun.
Where is your weather?
No rain or sun here
An icy breeze cuts through my skin
Is there enough weather?
whether or not rain
falls from melancholic skies
joy reigns joyful hearts
haikus are stupid
as stupid as the weather
wheres my chocolate
:rofl:
The wind has picked up.
A foul smell pervades this house.
Lulu, you can't count.
Epacris you rock
Did Yoda haiku invent?
Egg drips down my face
Ah haha. I laugh.
Pillocks and their sabotage
Not solemn. Weather.
with winter brings on sickness
there is only one sure fix
Chocolate and a cuddle
i just realised i cant count :rofl:
Can't rep you all now
NO sabotaging pillocks!
Wet pants from laughing
'Pillock' makes me laugh
Weather is laughable too
When will the rain come?
Rain will come your way
If Lulu keeps on laughing
Squeeze your pelvic floor
This thread ... is officially the most awesome thread on this forum. EVER.
The rain comes in buckets,
The river breaks sodden banks,
Flooding, inevitable.
Rain, rain, go away
Come again another day
Original, no?
water obsession
benefits no-one you know
get over it please
Walking on sunshine
I'm on sunshine baby oh
And don't it feel good?
Oh - the rain in Spain
Falls mainly on the puh-lain
I want paella
Obsessed by rainfall
Tired of dawn inspiration
Down under is dry
Must weather be bad?
blue skies and sunshine warm us
It's beach weather here :p
(and no, emoticons don't count as a syllable)
It's stormy inside
But the sun should be shining
Going out today
Pelvic floor ok
But still the rain is falling
What do i do now? :p
Inconsiderate
Rain! Take your coats and brollies
And just have fun, Ange
Michael is happy,
The rain, it is stopping now,
Too long, this last line is...
Trying to avoid housework
Time for a new subject, yeah?
I am masterchef
housework calls my name
but other things occupy
the mind that's waiting
Is housework the next
topic to capture our best
creative musings?
Mould and mildew grow
In my misty damp bathroom.
Oh! for sunshine there.
:p
Moving this thread now
It belongs with poetry
It will be happy
:)