Haiku challenge!

**AnyDream** · May 22nd, 2009, 01:24 PM

A haiku challenge
5 7 5 syllables!
Include the weather

**Jellyfish** · May 22nd, 2009, 01:33 PM

The rain has moved on
It was windy and heavy
My car is now clean

**Phteven** · May 22nd, 2009, 01:33 PM

it's nearly winter
i have to buy some new shoes
before my feet freeze

**Phteven** · May 22nd, 2009, 01:37 PM

children running in
bring in the chill autumn air
time to shut the door.

**Patooties** · May 22nd, 2009, 01:55 PM

Clothes soaked through with rain
Quickly jump in a warm bath
Hot milk brings a smile

**Jennifer13** · May 22nd, 2009, 02:07 PM

As heedless rain pounds,
the furtive wind heaves branches.
Stay close, my child. Warm.

**Nelle** · May 22nd, 2009, 02:19 PM

Haikus don't make sense.
Breathe winter, breathe rain, breathe in.
Haiku. Haiku. Breathe.

**Epacris** · May 22nd, 2009, 02:34 PM

Nelle, gah, you pillock!
Haikus are beautiful things.
The rain is nice too.

**AnyDream** · May 22nd, 2009, 02:38 PM

Creativity
Blossoms in your Haiku lines
Warm like the sunshine

**AnyDream** · May 23rd, 2009, 07:06 PM

A red leaf trembles
Fragile in the autumn wind.
Don't let this thread die!

**Lulu** · May 23rd, 2009, 07:18 PM

This thread is undead
No vegetarians here
Snake tastes like chicken

**AnyDream** · May 23rd, 2009, 07:26 PM

Lu your lines are true
Snake loves a rock warmed by sun.
Where is your weather?

**Lulu** · May 23rd, 2009, 07:37 PM

No rain or sun here
An icy breeze cuts through my skin
Is there enough weather?

paradise lost · May 23rd, 2009, 08:24 PM

whether or not rain
falls from melancholic skies
joy reigns joyful hearts

**Alipralli** · May 23rd, 2009, 08:32 PM

haikus are stupid
as stupid as the weather
wheres my chocolate

**Willow** · May 23rd, 2009, 08:37 PM

**Epacris** · May 23rd, 2009, 09:54 PM

The wind has picked up.
A foul smell pervades this house.
Lulu, you can't count.

**Lulu** · May 23rd, 2009, 10:12 PM

Epacris you rock
Did Yoda haiku invent?
Egg drips down my face

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