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  1. #1
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    Oct 2005
    North Queensland
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    A Poem for Reid

    Tonight, completely out of character, I wrote a poem for Reid. I haven't a creative bone in my body but once I started, the rest just flowed. Here it is:


    One November day
    There was a little boy
    Who came into my world
    In an early but precious way

    I saw your beautiful face
    Upon it was a smile
    My heart I heard it break
    So I held you for a while

    I whispered in your ear
    Son, I love you so
    I touched your little fingers
    And stroked your little toes

    Then came in your big Sisters
    Who held you in their arms
    Cradling their Baby Brother
    You left footprints on their Hearts

    The rock that is your Daddy
    His heart I saw it bleed
    For his tiny little mate
    Had forever gone to sleep

    In our hearts you planted
    A row of tiny seed
    That grew flowers in remembrance
    Of you our little man, Reid.

  2. #2
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    Jul 2010
    Rural NSW near ACT
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    That is beautiful.

  3. #3
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    Oct 2009
    1,089

    beautiful Sara

  4. #4
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    Oct 2009
    Bonbeach, Melbourne
    7,177

    that was beautiful.

  5. #5
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    Jan 2008
    2,037

    Just beautiful

  6. #6
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    Jul 2007
    melb
    8,498

    Very beautiful xoox

  7. #7

    May 2008
    Melbourne, Vic
    8,631

    Oh Sara... Lovely.

  8. #8
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    Jul 2008
    Home with my Son :)
    2,611

    Oh Sara, that's just beautiful.. I have tears reading it and thinking about your little man.

  9. #9
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    Mar 2007
    6,900

    That was so beautiful Sara. Thank you so much for sharing with us.

  10. #10
    Registered User

    Jan 2008
    Brisbane
    598

    Absolutly beautiful! I had goosebumps reading It and brought back some precious memories of the time that I got to spend with my lil man. Xxx

  11. #11
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    Sep 2007
    Brisbane
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    Beautiful

  12. #12
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    Feb 2010
    Gold Coast
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    Beautiful poem, hun.


  13. #13
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    Dec 2011
    Surrounded by sand
    883

    That was really lovely! Thanks for sharing

  14. #14
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    Dec 2008
    Melbourne, VIC
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    Just beautiful, and so touching. Thank you for sharing the poem for your precious little man

  15. #15
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    Sep 2009
    Darwin
    679

    Beautiful poem I too have tears reading it....may your little angel rest in peace

  16. #16
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    Oct 2008
    Victoria
    4,601

    That's a beautiful poem hun, brought tears to my eyes

  17. #17
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    Sep 2008
    Adelaide
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    I have tears, that is beautiful Sara xx

  18. #18
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    Oct 2005
    North Queensland
    2,528

    Thank you all.

    I'm so truely proud of myself and especially proud of Reid for whispering those words into my ear. I know it was him who helped me write it.

    More and more I believe that he is here with us. Watching over us.

    A few days after I had him we all went down to the local river as it was hot day. I had the camera with me and was just messing about taking random photos. I was standing in the river with the water up to my knees and this bright, iridescent blue Dragonfly flew right out in front of me and landed on a branch in front of me. Its sat there for a while and then flew away. I believe this was Reid telling me that he is here and he's ok.

    After I wrote the poem lastnight, DP sent me a text to say that a Dragonfly had flown up to his window (at 11.30pm!) hovered for a bit and flew away. He came to visit again tonight

    I know it might sound a little corny but its significant to us I guess.


    Thanks again for all your lovely comments.

    I hope those of you who know where the emotions come from when writing a poem like that can take some solace from it.
    xx
    Last edited by Ilithyia; March 22nd, 2012 at 11:33 PM.

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