Does the wording of this sound ok before I send it off???

[BrightSparkles]

Before I put this into the invite for a pending baby arrival invite, does the way i've worded this sound ok? I don't have any close friends living here to organise anything so just going to organise a picnic in the park with friends and family.

My big sister Jorja has been kind enough to share with me the things that she used eg, blankets, wraps,toys etc. However there are a few things Mummy and Daddy would like to get for me of my own. So if you would still like to get me something, Mummy and Daddy have made me a Wishing Cradle which you are more than welcome to put something into.
But really, Mummy, Daddy and Jorja would just love to share my pending arrival with you all.

TIA

[*LittleMissSummer*]

Sounds great. I love the way you worded it

[Fleur]

Sounds great, how sweet

[HotI]

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[Floweryfields]

Is it cash that you are wanting in the wishing cradle, cause that's not entirely clear if it is. The only other thing I'd change is:
But mostly, Mummy, Daddy and Jorja would just love to share my pending arrival with you all.