Hi all,
Hmm... a friend gave me this poem she wrote- we have an agreement that neither of us like the usual wishing well poems that people include with their wedding invites.

But my question is it a bit too coliquial, or maybe even a bit rude? It's a semi formal kind of invite to a semi formal kind of wedding...

We didn't want to use the poem
About the sheets and the kitchen bin
But yes, we will have a wisheing well
Make a wish and drop something in.

What does everyone think?

(Btw, fore mentioned friend is ok with me posting her work online )