anyone creative that can help?

[hj1981]

Im absolutly hopeless at poems and making things rhyme so i need help with this - today is my brothers 21st - and a few of us are pitching in money to hire a fishing boat for him so he can go fishing one weekend - no the idea was to give him a pic of a fishing boat with some sort of poem saying what the present is - i just want something short and sweet - can anyone help????

[briggsy's girl]

Im absolutly hopeless at poems and making things rhyme so i need help with this - today is my brothers 21st - and a few of us are pitching in money to hire a fishing boat for him so he can go fishing one weekend - no the idea was to give him a pic of a fishing boat with some sort of poem saying what the present is - i just want something short and sweet - can anyone help????

Such a pain to buy for
but now you're 21
we all chipped in together
to get you something fun

so get your gear together
we're granting you a wish
a boat we've hired for you
now bugger off - go fish!


sorry - really tired - but thought i'd put something in!

[hj1981]

BG - that is AWESOME!!! Thank you very much! i dont need anymore thats just perfect and im soooo happy now! hehehehe

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU xoxoxoxoxo

[hj1981]

Mods - this Post can be deleted now if you would like - BG has solved my problem!!!

Thank you!!!

[missymiss]

Great poem!