thread: For you, I can't forget

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  1. #1
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    Nov 2009
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    For you, I can't forget

    all by myself*
    The pain deep inside
    Aching in my chest
    it doesn't subside*

    alone in the dark
    I wonder what went wrong*
    you were only with me a while
    why couldn't you stay for long?

    will you ever come back?
    Or be a sibling you send?
    The pain of losing you
    will it ever end?

    I wish you were here now ,*
    safe with me
    Still in my belly
    five months I'd be

    but you left in September
    and now I'll never know
    what you'd look like
    Or into what kind of person you would grow

    Just something that poured out of me tonight And I have no one else to share it with,

    thanks for reading ....

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    Sep 2009
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    thank you for sharing your beautiful words ,hugs...

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    *hug* that's beautiful

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    Oct 2005
    A Nestle Free Zone... What about YOU?
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    That's just beautiful - I hope it helped you some... Big cuddles

  6. #6
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    May 2008
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    thats beautiful! hugs to you. xx

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    Nov 2009
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    beautiful

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    Nothing like a cuddle from DD after a hard day's work!

    Oct 2007
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    Mum2Romone, that is a beautiful poem. No words ... just cuddles

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    BellyBelly Member

    Jan 2008
    In beautiful chaos!
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  10. #10
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    Jan 2008
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    really are beautiful words, sorry it had to stem from something so painful and traumatic!

  11. #11
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    Jul 2008
    Home with my Son :)
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    That is a gorgeous poem.. Lots and lots of squishy cyber

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  13. #13
    BellyBelly Member

    Sep 2010
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    Beautiful!

  14. #14
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    Oct 2005
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    I could have written every single word myself...but I'm no good at that sort of thing. I would have been approaching the 5th month myself

    Thank god for people like you who can put our feelings into words.



    Thank you so much for sharing.