Need to submit this tonight; what do you think?

[Aimz]

Well done CM it sounds fantastic. You write really well!

[The[cookie]Doctor]

Thanks!!

Just really nervous about it, have been stressing about it for weeks.
Mostly worried about the second question as I failed every subject in 2005. And by fail i mean, got 0 for all my classes. So I really need to beg for this second chance.

[Ca Plane Pour Moi]

I would say it looked good.

Just one thing. You want to help women? Empower them? Educate them?

You're not cut out to be a midwife, love. A positive part of someone's pregnancy? You should say "I love hospital policy and want to push that over and above everything else, treating women as a number and attempting to contribute to the growing PND level in this country."

There you go, model midwife material - in my experience in hospital, that is.

[Isadora]

CM, that was really well written. I'm sure they will see you deserve a second chance due to all your personal issues that went on. Good luck let us know how you go.