Birthday Invite...What do you think????

[Beach Mama]

Ok I'm working on Isabelle's invite for her birthday and want some opinions!

I'm not the most creative or visual people in the world but to me the writing at the bottom under the poem looks odd but In not sure what other colour/style/font would look ok? Or is it ok and I have just been staring at it for too many hours!!

HERE is the link and I also need to fix the white bit at the side!

Any suggestions/comments appreciated!!

[myboysmumma]

To me it looks great, I would just increase the space between the poem and writing if that makes sense

Great design

[aussienic]

I think its lovely

[DoubleK]

its great!
i agree with what marydean said about putting 'Celebration and Dedication' on a seperate line.

great colours and a gorgeous little girl!

[AnyDream]

Everyone will love it!

[Ozziehoffy]

Tan, I think it's beautiful. Great job!

[Antheia]

I like it. Very good!

[StrawberryMumma]

Oh my goodness! That is sooo cute Tan. Great job.

[{sarah}]

Very nice

[AnyDream]

Very nice...I would just break up the big writing a bit more, like this
Join us for Isabelle's Ist Birthday
Celebration and Dedication

(so it's not so wide compared with the other text). But really it's just gorgeous, love the colours especially!

[Beach Mama]

Thanks for the suggestions ladies! I have moved the Join us bit down and separated the bits you suggested Marydean and it looks heaps better! Thanks! I played around with colours and the whole thing for HOURS so far! I want to print them this weekend so I think Im almost done! Will upload changes soon!

[Beach Mama]

Final copy in my gallery now!

I had to change it around a bit and decided to do it vertically!!!! but it's pretty much done, now I just need to print one copy and see what it looks like then get all printed and sent!!

HERE it is, the quality has been dropped right down so I could upload it quicker!!!!

[Daydream Believer]

Looks fantastic Tan!