thread: Help needed drafting a letter to school and so on

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  1. #1
    Registered User

    Apr 2009
    in the garden
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    Can totally see where you're coming from, it's frustrating to see people who don't 'get' what road safety near school is.

    what SS said ^^... have you got something to go off to start with?

    ETA - posted at the same time
    It might be a good incident to put in your letter to really illustrate your point.

  2. #2
    Registered User

    Jul 2009
    2,109

    Wow - totally see where you are coming from. I think with those sorts or organisations, consider the tactic that will make THEM tic. Ie - they won't care about the annoying man but the school will care about the safety of students and the fact that teachers talking to people stopped there are only making the area less safe.

  3. #3
    Registered User

    Oct 2006
    Sydney
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    This is how I'd do it:
    Start off explaining why you are writing, maybe even in bold type at the top. "RE: Parking in 'No Stopping' zones in front of school grounds"
    Body of letter: you see loads of people doing it; you are concerned for the safety of the children.
    Offer suggestions: cars can be parked further down the street and parents should escort children to the crossing; perhaps the school/council can recruit a volunteer lollypop person to man the crossing, having the double benefit of shooing away the illegally stopped cars and ensuring kids cross over safely.
    Sign off: briefly recap your argument - the stopping of vehicles in those areas is unsafe and illegal. You would like to see that law enforced either by the school or by the council.

    While passion is good, politely worded arguments are taken more seriously IMO. Good luck.

  4. #4
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    Nov 2009
    Scottish expat living in Geelong
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    Dear *insert name*

    I would like to bring your attention to the parking practices of many parents outside *insert name* school in the mornings and at the end of the school day.

    *insert what parents are doing*

    As I'm sure you will realise, this is not only dangerous but it is illegal. I am extremely frustrated that these lawbreakers are not being dealt with and can only assume this is because the problem has not been highlighted before now. I don't want to wait until a child is injured or hurt before a solution is found, so would like to suggest a joint meeting between *insert recipients* to discuss a strategy to ensure that all children are safe on their way to school.

    I look forward to your response

    yadda yadda yadda

    Something like that?