sorry kaz. been meaning to post but just hadnt managed to.

i enjoyed it at the start, but was over florentino;s womanising ways. i found that it was quite long-winded at parts, going into unneccesary description but maybe that's to establish the characters more?
sorry, im being vague here but trying to write this quick while ds is asleep and i can do stuff in the kitchen.

i'll write more but found that last chapter hurried- how fermina and florentino got together so quickly and it seemed so convienient.

i have to run but will come back to post more.