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  1. #1
    Registered User

    Dec 2007
    Victoria
    7,260

    Dear So and So,

    I am writing to enquire after the availability of full time employment in "The Firm's" Harvey Bay offices. My family and I are relocating to the area, and having worked for The Firm for 3 years previously, I am interested in returning in some capacity.

    Ideally, I am looking for a position that will allow me to pursue the practical experience necessary to gain my drafting license (??), with the view to project management.
    Since leaving The Firm X years ago, my main focus has been ....... . I feel I have attained the experience in my current role required to move forward with my career and am interested in moving forward with The Firm for the long term.

    I have also attached my full resume for your reference and look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours sincerely, etc etc.



    lol - sorry got carried away I have no idea what your hubby does so hopefully this is helpful!! If not, feel free to call me a dope and ignore it ;p

  2. #2
    Registered User

    Dec 2007
    Sunny Qld
    14,682

    oooh thats good Alexis...

    Maz - yup, taking in your suggestions too. I'll have to draft something up and see what you guys think....