thread: Haiku challenge!

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  1. #1
    Registered User

    Jul 2005
    Sydney
    7,896

    As heedless rain pounds,
    the furtive wind heaves branches.
    Stay close, my child. Warm.

  2. #2
    BellyBelly Life Subscriber

    Feb 2006
    South Eastern Suburbs, Vic
    6,054

    Haikus don't make sense.
    Breathe winter, breathe rain, breathe in.
    Haiku. Haiku. Breathe.

  3. #3
    Registered User

    Aug 2007
    Sydney
    1,691

    Nelle, gah, you pillock!
    Haikus are beautiful things.
    The rain is nice too.

  4. #4
    Registered User

    Aug 2006
    On the other side of this screen!!!
    11,129

    Creativity
    Blossoms in your Haiku lines
    Warm like the sunshine

  5. #5
    Registered User

    Aug 2006
    On the other side of this screen!!!
    11,129

    A red leaf trembles
    Fragile in the autumn wind.
    Don't let this thread die!

  6. #6
    Lucy in the sky with diamonds.

    Jan 2005
    Funky Town, Vic
    7,070

    This thread is undead
    No vegetarians here
    Snake tastes like chicken

  7. #7
    Registered User

    Aug 2006
    On the other side of this screen!!!
    11,129

    Lu your lines are true
    Snake loves a rock warmed by sun.
    Where is your weather?