HELP - 50 words mini romance for library comp :P

**~ Zarava Flutterby ~** · February 18th, 2011, 08:19 PM

Love it! You've done well. One suggestion - maybe italicise 'THAT', instead of capping. I know you want the emphasis but it kind of hangs out like a skyscraper in such a short piece LOL. If it's a librarian judging they will *love* the pointing reference, it's a kind of librarian in-joke.

Thanks hun, also they give you a form to write it down on, do you think it's fine to print it out and staple to the form or should i handwrite it?

**~ Zarava Flutterby ~** · February 18th, 2011, 08:22 PM

Oops and it should be SIGHT not SITE right... lol at yes the internet does confuse us

**AnyDream** · February 18th, 2011, 08:25 PM

I would hand write it best you can and include some cute little illustrations if it's within your capability. It's the details that will win it or not. for eg, eldest DD won a comp, it was draw yourself ala Diary of a wimpy kid, she drew herself holding a copy of the book. winner!

**~ Zarava Flutterby ~** · February 18th, 2011, 08:26 PM

Thanks hun, your a legend, might just jot it down pop it in and hope for the best.. i don't expect to win but it made my brain work a little

**~ Zarava Flutterby ~** · February 25th, 2011, 02:22 PM

I just got a call from the library and guess what.............................................. .......

I WON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They had over 40 entries over the shire and they picked mine!

I still can't believe it, i won a $75 Big W voucher.