thread: HELP - 50 words mini romance for library comp :P

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  1. #1

    Jul 2009
    Out North, Vic
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    Love it! You've done well. One suggestion - maybe italicise 'THAT', instead of capping. I know you want the emphasis but it kind of hangs out like a skyscraper in such a short piece LOL. If it's a librarian judging they will *love* the pointing reference, it's a kind of librarian in-joke.
    Thanks hun, also they give you a form to write it down on, do you think it's fine to print it out and staple to the form or should i handwrite it?

  2. #2

    Jul 2009
    Out North, Vic
    8,538

    Oops and it should be SIGHT not SITE right... lol at yes the internet does confuse us

  3. #3
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    Aug 2006
    On the other side of this screen!!!
    11,129

    I would hand write it best you can and include some cute little illustrations if it's within your capability. It's the details that will win it or not. for eg, eldest DD won a comp, it was draw yourself ala Diary of a wimpy kid, she drew herself holding a copy of the book. winner!

  4. #4

    Jul 2009
    Out North, Vic
    8,538

    Thanks hun, your a legend, might just jot it down pop it in and hope for the best.. i don't expect to win but it made my brain work a little

  5. #5

    Jul 2009
    Out North, Vic
    8,538

    I just got a call from the library and guess what.............................................. .......





























    I WON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    They had over 40 entries over the shire and they picked mine!
    I still can't believe it, i won a $75 Big W voucher.
    Last edited by ~ Zarava Flutterby ~; February 25th, 2011 at 02:32 PM.

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    Feb 2007
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    Woo hoo! That is awesome!!! I thought it was pretty good!

  7. #7
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    May 2009
    SEQLD
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    wow well done! Grats

  8. #8
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    Aug 2006
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    See, I told you it was good!...and that it would appeal to the librariany sense of humour!! Massive congratulations!

    Now, are you going to spend any of your voucher on...BOOKS?