How do i know if its any good?

[Maruschke]

PM me I need to BD tonight and I don't know you from a bar of soap . I'll let you know if it's steamy enough!

[appletree]

Hahaha, ok...

[briggsy's girl]

there aren't a lot of AO members, so you could ask for access and share the story (there is a naughty stories section) and ask for feedback. there are also some AO stories posted in there which may give you an idea

feedback would depend on making sure you make it clear what SORT of sex scene you're trying to create. is it meant to be romantic? hot and heavy? do you want it to be really descriptive or more suggestive? are you aiming to arouse the reader or simply to describe?

you probably need to have your storyline pretty well fleshed out in your mind so that you know what you're aiming to achieve. there is no point taking the sex scene to soft porn status if the rest of the story is very sedate - and vice verse - you don't want a 150 page build up to the final shag, very descriptive of every touch/kiss/interlude, and then lose the momentum in that scene because it hasn't stayed true to the rest of the story

[Maruschke]

I liked it

[appletree]

Thanks Maruschke, i will definately incorporate your feedback

Thanks BG! I will def think about all of those points, at the moment the one i am working on feels a bit too full on on its own, but i want it to appear pretty seemless with the overall context and style of the story.