June 8th, 2009, 05:43 PM
#1
I like it ... I'll maybe just make that second forever a Forever. With a capital.
But otherwise it's really beautifull
Last edited by Inanna; June 9th, 2009 at 10:23 PM .
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June 9th, 2009, 09:28 PM
#2
I really like it as well. I don't think it sounds fragmented at all, it's really lovely.
A beautiful way to honour your twins.
June 9th, 2009, 09:40 PM
#3
I am so sorry for you loss.
I think it would be nice to include Isabel's twin on the headstone - I don't think it takes away from her, her twin is apart of who she is and the journey of how she came to be.
I hope that you can find the perfect wording for Isabel's headstone.
June 9th, 2009, 09:52 PM
#4
Hi hun, I am so sorry for the loss of your beautiful twins. What you have written is really beautiful. My suggestion would be :
In loving memory of
Isabel Ann
14 February 2009
Much loved daughter of Luke and Kylie
Forever in our hearts and thoughts
Forever with her twin
We will always love you and miss you
June 9th, 2009, 10:11 PM
#5
Such beautiful and loving care you are giving to your babies...
I really loved Starbrights version -
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