OMG I can't believe you get such a wordy and complicated report for your DS in Grade 1!!!!

Doesn't make his 'learning environment' much fun, does it? As for 'keep up the good work' - is that directed at him or you?!

I work in corporate communications and if a company I worked for tried to put so much standardised commenting in one paragraph I would be strongly suggesting otherwise, so I think your feedback is well and truly on the right track. IMO what you've received isn't even going to be understood by some parents (esp if it's their first child) and what's the point of communicating with parents if you're going to speak a different language...

I'd be tempted to 'standardise' your survey answer! Only joking.