From the perspective of being a teacher's assistant I know how frustrated teachers are in Victoria by the limitations of the reporting system so it's not laziness it's legalities

From the perspective of a parent who has received many reports of this nature i know that I don't mind as long as there was a persoanlised comment at the end.

I think what you have written is excellent though... feedback is always valuable as most parents don't have the time or confidence to undertake it. Well Done!