I am trying to write poems for Masons god parents to have printed onto candles for his christening.

This is what I have written for his godmother:

I want you to know how lucky I feel
To have a godmother like you
Someone who will always love me
no matter what I do

Thank you for always being there
And watching me as I grow
You are certainly very special to me
Much more than you'll ever know.

Love Always, Mason


What do you think?

Now I need to write something for his godfather and I am stumped! I kinda wanted to stear away from the lovey dovey bits iykwim?

Any advice would be great