i would just take out the first sentence "my name is.. i have 3 kids..etc". This is not neccessary. like Karina said is there any of your skills that the job ad mentioned that you can put in the letter.
tell them why you would be great for the job. say that you are willing and capable of learning new ways and adjusting to situations easily.
hope that helps.
good luck




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