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  1. May 22nd, 2009, 01:33 PM #1
    Phteven
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    it's nearly winter
    i have to buy some new shoes
    before my feet freeze
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  2. May 22nd, 2009, 01:37 PM #2
    Phteven
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    children running in
    bring in the chill autumn air
    time to shut the door.
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  3. May 22nd, 2009, 01:55 PM #3
    Patooties
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    Clothes soaked through with rain
    Quickly jump in a warm bath
    Hot milk brings a smile
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  4. May 22nd, 2009, 02:07 PM #4
    Jennifer13
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    As heedless rain pounds,
    the furtive wind heaves branches.
    Stay close, my child. Warm.
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  5. May 22nd, 2009, 02:19 PM #5
    Nelle
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    Haikus don't make sense.
    Breathe winter, breathe rain, breathe in.
    Haiku. Haiku. Breathe.
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  6. May 22nd, 2009, 02:34 PM #6
    Epacris
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    Nelle, gah, you pillock!
    Haikus are beautiful things.
    The rain is nice too.
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  7. May 22nd, 2009, 02:38 PM #7
    AnyDream
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    Creativity
    Blossoms in your Haiku lines
    Warm like the sunshine
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