Library has a comp running at the moment for a short piece of writing, must be 50 words exactly, story must be a mini romance - set in the world of liraries or books and complete in itself.

So i've been playing and am by no means actually any good at it BUT what do you think.. criticism needed....

He's a self confessed bookworm, she's the latest IT girl.
What was she doing here, in his library?
He pointed and joked, "Mills and Boon are THAT way".
He heard her mutter to herself “never judge a book by it's cover”.
He knew then it was love at first site.


It's REALLY hard to keep to exactly 50 words, thinking about it now it's pretty crap.. but oh well i gave it a shot.. i might enter it anyway and see how i go.. what do you lovely ppl's think?