thread: Wrote this for Milana - what do you think?

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  1. #1
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    Sep 2006
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    It's beautiful Tracey, thanks for sharing.

    I wouldn't change anything, it's from your heart and that says more than anything else.

  2. #2
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    Dec 2005
    Melbourne, Vic
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    Its brought tears to my eyes, I wouldn't change it, I can feel it coming straight from the heart.

  3. #3
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    Apr 2008
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    It brought tears to my eyes - I wouldn't change a thing!

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    Nov 2004
    VIC
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    Its perfect hun- beautiful words hun
    hugs
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  5. #5
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    Sep 2007
    Blue Mountains, NSW
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    hi
    thanks ladies. Could have wrote a fair few poems while sat in the waiting room in emergency (5 hours).
    My daughter had Concussion following a head Injury at playgroup, she was vomitting everywhere and still we were in the waiting room for several hours. She is OK now though.

  6. #6
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    Mar 2008
    North Northcote
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    I think the poem is beautiful. I wouldn't change a thing, it comes from a place deep within and is a special bond between you and Milana. It's truly beautiful.

    Can't believe the wait times in emergency for concussion!

  7. #7
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    Jun 2007
    Forster NSW
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    The poem is perfect, just the way you wrote it. The words are so meaningful and beautiful.

  8. #8
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    Jan 2008
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    Your words are beautiful Tracey - just like Milana was. Your poem made me cry. Don't change anything.

    I still think of you and Milana all the time darl xxx