I think you've done a fantastic job and been really thorough - and I think the process of writing a plan like that is a really positive one because it allows you to really think through your ideas and understand why you want what you do. That's so important!

But I'm going to have to agree with Bec - it is definitely FAR too long hun. If you want them to read it (and refer to it during labour) it has to be cut down majorly. Bec's editing tips are good, I'll add a few other ideas to cut the length down.

* Aim to get it down to 1 - 1.5 pages tops and get the layout uncluttered (point form is good as it's easy to read and forces you to be concise).
* You don't need tell them the reasons you want/don't want something. They don't need/want to know and it just adds unnecessary bulk For example the point about medical students - just say you don't consent to them being present and leave it at that.
The part about pain relief at the beginning -
If I ask for pain relief in the transitional stage please remind me how close we are to the end and let me reconsider. If, and when I request any pain relief, please encourage me to further discuss it with Anthony, as he knows me better than any medical practitioner and is best aware of my wishes.
This is something to discuss with DH/support people beforehand. It's their job to look out for you here, the midwives generally won't ask you to think about it a bit longer before you have pain relief. You need to depend on DH for this so I'd take it out and make sure he's aware of your wishes.

If baby and I are well, I would like my baby to decide his/her own due date. I am happy to discuss a plan should my pregnancy reach the end of term at 42 weeks. Should labour induction become medically necessary at any time, I'd like to start with the least artificial means first - i.e. nipple stimulation, acupuncture, massage or a stretch and sweep before a medical induction. I would like time to allow the natural inductions work.

If this is unsuccessful and a medical induction or augmentation becomes medically necessary I?d like:

To only have my waters to be broken at first instance if my cervix is open. I would like to be given a generous amount of time for labour to establish upon rupture of membranes (i.e. more than just a few hours) before other forms of medical induction / augmentation.
If you're already in hospital in labour this is all going to be a bit of a moot point since however it happened, labour has started. All the stuff about natural induction, I'd take out since you'd be doing that at home, of your own accord and that has nothing to do with medical staff. The point about breaking your water - they can't do that if your cervix is completely closed, it has to be at least a little bit dilated for them to be able to get to your bag of waters.

Something else you could think about which you often see in birth plans - "I don't want xyx unless medically necessary". When you think about it, the midwife/ob will not do anything that they don't think is "medically necessary". So leaving it up to their discretion with that phrase is basically saying "do what you like". If you feel strongly about no VE's (which are never medically necessary if you have a good midwife ) then say "I do not consent to VE's during labour". The word "consent" conveys your meaning very clearly.

One more thing - think about staying home as long as you can during labour, because then alot of the things you've put in here you won't even have to fight with them about

Good luck!