Oh wow!! I opened this story up earlier and thought, "hmm i might wait till tonight". Just sat back with some mint slice biscuits and absolutely loved it! you did sooo well, thats great that your hubby found his voice in the end and told them to unwrap her. You've put soo much detail into everything, her squashed nose, her lip pushed sideways... just lovely!!
I was on gas with my DD and i can't remember any of those special moments... you've done a fantastic job, congratulations!!! xx